Рецензия на «Crazy for Loving You» (Ольга Кэмпбелл)
Emily is of Russian decent.
Дон Борзини 27.01.2015 09:33 Заявить о нарушении
Yes, of course, "descent" must be here! It seems the letter "s" just accidentally dropped out... :-)
Thanks for the comment, Don!
Ольга Кэмпбелл 27.01.2015 09:52 Заявить о нарушении
Emily: I have to finish my article, it’ll take a couple of minutes, and then we can sit and eat together. (eat each other)
Дон Борзини 27.01.2015 10:00 Заявить о нарушении
they write dah not da btw. bastards. cause of these dah dumb hv to be carefull all the time not to spoil the jerks
Дон Борзини 27.01.2015 10:13 Заявить о нарушении
Even their names were similar – Paul and Pavel.
It's actually the same name btw
Дон Борзини 27.01.2015 10:18 Заявить о нарушении
'sweeheart' - jeez i love that - it sounds like swedheard, like there is some swedish flavour in that family value, isn't it?
Дон Борзини 27.01.2015 10:44 Заявить о нарушении
'darling' seems a bit better though, again, reminds me of Darwin for some reason.
Anyway, conclusion. Very, very sad story. Dammit, kind of dynamite. Was waiting for some money from Paul to pop up. No happy end, though. Makes it even more sad.
Sorry for comments if that hurts
Дон Борзини 27.01.2015 11:03 Заявить о нарушении
Your comments don’t hurt, Mr Borzini, and why would they? It’s actually very nice of you to take the trouble and not only read my stuff but also comment on it. Much appreciated! Who else here would be so particular about my choice of words and slips of the pen…
This sad story is, as they say, “loosely based” on real facts (but “Paul” is still alive, btw).
The only thing in your comments I’d disagree about is about the names. You can say that Paul and Pavel are the same names, but they are actually different, especially in this particular context. How about George and Георгий? The same, but still entirely different. And I AM the author here, so whatever I say is right, Mr. Know-All! :))))
BTW, the play was written for the contest arranged by the acting studio in a playwrights’ workshop. And yours truly has written it with an intention to play the leading role. The Grand Jury, however, although quite liked the play, advised to make some changes. They said Paul’s monologue was a bit too melodramatic… I didn’t bother to rewrite, was too lazy. But not wanting to waste the time and efforts spent, post it here.
I am glad you paid so much attention to this humble anecdote, DARLING!!!
Ольга Кэмпбелл 27.01.2015 18:35 Заявить о нарушении
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