The first Combat Action

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Мои друзья из США русского не знают. Переводы своих рассказов на английский
1 Первый бой, 2 Берта 3 В небе Сталинграда. Ноябрь 1942 4 Уран 5 Сталинград. Держитесь Фюрер вам поможет.
Рассказы были отправлены в США и Великобританию. Если были.
грубые ошибки, то исправлены, Переводы здесь, чтобы не терялись и
 для того, чтобы друзья моих друзей тоже могли это прочитать я перевёл.
 http://www.proza.ru/2012/08/08/333 на русском Первый бой 

               
After Smolensk battle Germans resumed their offensive to Moscow. Bid concentrated the main forces of the Western Front on the defensive lines in Vyazma. To defense
Moscow all forces were sent there. The Air Force received the newest fighters such as the MiG-3, LaGG-3 and Yak-1. All forces were directed to protect capital from Germans planes  bombing. (By the way, the  air defense of the capital, was better than, say, in London)
The first battle of lieutenant Dmitry Ivanov   took place on October 4, 1941Dmitry was already 22, and he was flying for 3 years long and already considered not bad  pilot They have to patrol in the vicinity of Karmanovo not to allow bombing the bridges A lot  of rivers crossed that  wooded area were there.
Thousands of soldiers and armed technical went to the heart of our country, to Moscow over that bridges and ferries which worked with overload.
After receiving his mission, Dmitry donned a parachute and with help of the mechanic climbed into the cab. That he wasn’ t  worried, but it’s the first combat mission, with all the fears. He was  driven(slave?), like Serge  The main objective was  to hang on the  the  leader's tail and protect him And how he will behave himself? And how will to behave  the new fighter LaGG-3? And how does she compare with the vaunted Messerschmitt? If he stand in that his first air combat, do not let their comrades down
These thoughts were busy in his head on the ground and all became familiar and clear. in the cockpit
October silence morning were broken by roar  engines of LaGGs fighters. In 20 seconds he was in the air, and the earth ran back and down.
In headset pops and background noise. Two links LaGGs, as much as 6 fighters climb. Visibility was good and  even   Vyazma located in 30 kilometers   was still clearly visible from a height of only 600 meters, but it was lasted only seconds, before they stood up for the course.
After 5 minutes of the flight they were in the patrol area. The height 3000 meters , the sun was shining and the earth in the haze is simply mesmerizing!
Messers are on course below!( Attention! 6 o’clock?)
It so happened that the sun was behind, and the enemy below flight level  in the patrol the area .  The ideal position for the attack!
All the Soviet fighters rushed to the attack, and the Germans saw the first attacked and the first burning and falling their planes. German unit was scattered.
Dmitry was followed the leader. Leader opened fire and another Messer puffed and it's wing flew off and the fighter randomly, rushed to the ground.
The leader turned to the right and began to withdraw from the diving. Dmitri was late just for a second, he did not think a step forward, he missed his leader, the plane began to shake of over-speed, and the land swiftly rushed him.
Dmitry reduced engine power and resting his feet in the dashboard began to pull the handle .
He was able to snatch a plane in 50 meters, and finally went to the set. The  back  of  Dmitry  was wet with sweat, but the plane was removed.
It lasted less than 10 seconds, but the leader was no longer visible. The back is covered with sweat again. Throw the leader in the combat! It's a shame!
His short and painful thoughts were interrupted by rapidly increasing black dots.
Tracers stretched from that  black dots. Dmitri was coming  in forehead
-Fuck, I do not turn to a side!
He pulled the trigger and 20mm cannon and machine guns started talking, spewing hatred of all fascist bastards. Volley  were lasted less than a second, black crosses swept very close.
Dmitri turned the plane, trying to see the point of aircraft, but the horizon was clear.
Yet a couple of bullets were hit the Messerschmitt-109E, piloted by Hans Shtaubergom. He was 25 years old. and had 2 years  experience fighting in Poland, and England. He shorted down 2 Polish and 2 British aircraft, and a trip to the Soviet Union seemed to him the nice adventure.
Engine with cooling water, which had and Messerschmitt and Lavochkin with Gorbunov was more vulnerable than the air-cooled engine.
As a bullet hit the  cooling system of Messer, the  water started to run out, then boiled oil, overheating has come and the engine has stopped. Altitude was about 1,500 meters.
The plane  flew over forest  and  a field  was 10 to 15 kilometers in front   .
 That was a temporary territory of the USSR,  but the glorious Vermacht so rapidly moved to Moscow, that Hans  decided to land on  the field.
Messer descended 5-7 meters per second, the speed was maintained, and Hans knew that he would hold on.
Yesterday Aunt Dusya chopped to hack branches, placing it on a bunch lying near. The handle of ax   tired and broke. So, Aunt Dusya decided to take  the new handle for ax next morning and brought the ax and rope for branches that had to be taken out later with a convenient opportunity.
Her thoughts were interrupted by gliding plane, which touches the ground, and stopped plowed furrow.
Aunt Dusya saw a huge crosses on the plane and rushed to the airplane
When the plane dropped down to the ground, Hans opening cockpit and started to get out. He almost got out when Aunt Dusya in two jumps reached the aircraft and hit on the  Hans's head by the handle of ax.  Hans dropped  on the lantern, and the woman took the rope and tied his hands tightly to German occupier..
So Aunt Dusya with Hans went to the Village Council, where she  gained additional respect for the villagers.
Dmitry, meanwhile, found his comrades and they landed on there native airfield without losses.
He got out of the plane and went to his commander to get a beating, and maybe worse
But pilots and NKVD men of different alloys, so commander decided not to tell anyone, as  driven came off, another reason that they shorted down three Germans planes and did’ t  loss  no one own! It was first sortie  for Dmitry!
A phone suddenly call from headquarters. It turned out that shot down one more and everybody to give it up, they say, we did not hit. Hans was questioned. He described the situation, and found that he was shorted down  by Dmitry!
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