Creator

Recently Immortal Spirit
Flies above the Earth
It’s a ghost of previous achievement
It’s not a little worth
It touches the people who get lost in their week-days
And doesn’t leave them any choice to run or go away
It takes mind out from the head
Deprives of consciousness
And put them to a flowering bed
This is full of novel senses
Since that time selected people suffer from delight
Finally they can see life in another light
It gives them calm of darkest night
Without disturbed sound
Defects of live becomes so slight
Due to internal proud
This way past is carried away through a few decades
Because of efforts of the Spirit now true exists
You always ready to stroke your knife
Thank you, Creator, you built my life

21.05.06


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Thank you, Creator, you built my life!
А вы, что в стороне от этого?

Нина Степановна Маслова1   20.05.2017 22:46     Заявить о нарушении
Нет, конечно же!

Екатерина Крестникова   21.05.2017 04:23   Заявить о нарушении
Рада за вас, Екатерина!

Нина Степановна Маслова1   21.05.2017 06:28   Заявить о нарушении
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